The Official Writing Challenge
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This is absolutely beautiful! Your words stirred a tear and left a smile on my face. The characters are so heart-warming, and real. This is a great idea told wonderfully!
A wonderful story. I loved the compassion and detailed conversation. Great job.
I loved this! And it brought a tear or two to my eyes too. Keep writing!
The dialogue is incredible here, just brings these characters to life. Amazing work here, don't stop!
Wonderfully well written. The tears are still rolling down my face. You have a true gift, so keep on writing.
Wow--that passage from Isaiah is just perfect in this story. Very nicely done.
This is an absolutely wonderful story. I loved it and was cheering as he read the Bible to his family. Very well done.
Wonderfully well-written and heart-warming story! The dialogue was very "real," and the ending was so satisfying!! :) Thank you for sharing this delightful piece!
Very well done! You really drew me in with this story. The dialog was real and the ending wonderful!
I love seeing stories like this...great job telling it!
This was very moving! You drew me in from the beginning and I read all the way through. A wonderful 'story' with heart and meaning and an ending that fits right! Thanks for sharing!
A well told story. I loved this: "The world was my oyster and I went along with a big ole pearly smile on my face.
Wow! I was really bowled over by this piece! I wonder why it didn't place. Maybe I don't know much, but if I'd have been a judge .. my highest points would have gone to this entry! I am so sure you have high points with God though! Keep writing like this and you will not be in Intermediate long. Thanks also, for commenting on my poem for Gone fishing. I thank you for taking the time to read!
This is a beautiful story. It is well written and tells a great truth.