The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/07
I enjoyed the imagery here. The sentence about the calculus ran a little long but I'm not strong in grammar so keep that in mind. The last line is a great suggestion, thanks!
01/26/07
I like your title, and your paragraph about painting "word pictures."

I'd encourage you to avoid beginning an essay with a definition, and to stretch yourself to find new ways to express familiar concepts.

The encouragement at the end is greatly appreciated.