The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
Great story. It flowed so well, I could totally picture Kevin and your ending made me smile.
01/25/07
I like it! Very true to high school life, and your narrator's voice is engaging. Super ending.
01/25/07
Great sense of setting here - you did a great job of putting us right there with the kids. I also loved your ending.
01/25/07
I agree with these comments. You drew the reader in as if we were but a locker away watching it all unfold.
I really like this. It's familiar in a good way, if that makes sense. I think your protagonist is realistically interested in the "outcast," and what's nice is that the end leaves you knowing that things get better for Kevin. Great job!
This certainly deserved to win! I loved the ending and the description of Kevin. I could feel the mixed emotions you wove into here. Great job!
02/01/07
Congratulations. I loved this story, a great win!!
Thank you for this great piece. It read well, bought back some school memories and overall, was a fine read!
I apprciate it!
Congratulations on your win. This is an excellent story. I was a judge, and I really enjoyed it.