The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
Good parallel structure in this object lesson.

I wonder if the conclusion So, the next time you see a work of art that you dont understand or cant see the beauty in, just smile as you remember that you are His masterpiece! would be stronger if you suggested that the next time we see a person whose "look" we don't understand, remember that they are His masterpiece? That seems to be more supported by what you said in the essay.

This was pleasant to read, and nicely written.

01/25/07
Although I'm not a grandmother, I'm a mom and boy that fridge art work is precious! This was a very nice read.