The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/07
Wonderful, wonderful last paragraph.
01/20/07
This was very wonderful. I loved the way you used such a fantastic vision as a metaphor for writing. This is good work!
01/22/07
What amazing imagery! This is truly beautiful.
01/22/07
Very nice writing. The final paragraph tied up all the things I was unsure of as I read. Very descriptive. Great job. God bless.
WoW! This is terrific. You maintained my interest throughout, yet it took that last paragraph to enlighten and tie it all together. Just beautiful.
01/24/07
I loved the imagery and how the last paragraph brought it all together. Nice!
Beautiful imagery. I was wondering right up until the last paragraph how this related to writing, but saw that it certainly does.
Well done.
This is very good. I really liked the way you brought out the need to learn to unleash our writing thoughts.