The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
I really enjoyed this story! Colorful dialect and great character sketch! I could see and hear both the main character and the narrator as a little girl and a grown woman. They came alive for me!
01/12/07
A very enjoyable character sketch! I loved beautiful piece and really enjoyed reading it. Well done!
01/14/07
deliteful naration. even if the grammar nazi in me is trunign it red. takes you right down to the south and a hundred years ago.
Very good. Keep writing, you'll go along way.