The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
Boy does this bring back memories! Very entertaining.
Funny, this made me laugh so hard. I'm glad I'm not the only one this kind of stuff happens to. But hey, I even struggle with cake mix. Good writing!
01/11/07
Oh, dear unfortunately I can relate to this only too well. My bowl of cake was pink, but you described it much better that I would have. Well done!
01/11/07
very entaining. although the year would be helpful earlier. considering you can by turquis icing anywhere. im glad im a natual born cook....when i can remeber im cooking something
01/11/07
I think we've all been here. Funny, funny, funny. I felt the sense of urgency. Good job.
01/12/07
I thought the rescue attmepts were quite hilarious. I can imagine lots of people relating to this.
01/12/07
Very funny--I laughed out loud more than once.

I think the stronger ending is your next-to-last paragraph. And be careful of "it's" instead of "its."

This was absolutely delightful.
Your account is so funny, and I can definitely see it all unfolding (literally!) Thanks for making my day.