The Official Writing Challenge
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11/24/06
Oh, I am moved to tears. Wonderful job writing this painful story.
11/24/06
Oh, wow. This is so beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this touching story. God bless you. Well done!
My heart aches. I beautifully told story of such sorrow. God Bless.
Good Job. This is the first Faithwriter's article that I felt like I could cry over.
11/28/06
This really communicated raw emotion and nothing else. If I wasn't in a public place, I would probably be crying. It is extremely well-done, and straight from the heart. Well done.
11/30/06
The last half of this, especially, is so gripping and atmospheric. Congratulations on a VERY much deserved "highly commended."
To be honest, I'm disappointed. I believe this story deserves first place. It was heart wrenching with vivid details and yet had the gentle reminder that God is in control. I cannot say enough about this. God bless you and the talent he has obviously given you.