The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I am moved to tears. Wonderful job writing this painful story.
Oh, wow. This is so beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing this touching story. God bless you. Well done!
My heart aches. I beautifully told story of such sorrow. God Bless.
Good Job. This is the first Faithwriter's article that I felt like I could cry over.
This really communicated raw emotion and nothing else. If I wasn't in a public place, I would probably be crying. It is extremely well-done, and straight from the heart. Well done.
The last half of this, especially, is so gripping and atmospheric. Congratulations on a VERY much deserved "highly commended."
To be honest, I'm disappointed. I believe this story deserves first place. It was heart wrenching with vivid details and yet had the gentle reminder that God is in control. I cannot say enough about this. God bless you and the talent he has obviously given you.