The Official Writing Challenge
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You have presented some good thoughts here, but your article would benefit by some proofreading for grammar, punctuation and typos. Also, breaking up your writing into paragraphs would be helpful. Keep writing - you really have some good things to say.
11/24/06
You express your views clearly and your words are easy to understand. Putting this story into paragraph form would make it easier to read. Nice work.