The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/06
tearjerker
11/17/06
Oh, I liked this. I'd like to hear a bit more about her though. What about some other times she's need a "lifeguard?" To me, this was a bit short to capture such a profound message. I'd like to see this expanded.
This holds a great message however I'm with Allison, this begs to be expanded. May the Lord continue to guide your quill as you write for the glory of HIM!
This caught me with my thoughts of my own children going to their first everythings. A mother wants to protect her offspring, but can't always be there. This is written masterfully. Keep writing.
11/21/06
How precious are our little ones. Your concerns are touching and you have put your trust in the Lord to keep your baby safe. Well written and it comes from the heart.
11/23/06
This was touching. Thank you for writing it!
11/23/06
Congratulations on your "Highly Commended" rating. I think you've got a great devotional here!
Aww this is lovely. I looked after a baby in France and I worried then, I'm not even his mother. I do know one thing, God never sleeps, He is always watching. God bless you.
Melissa