The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/06
Please post more of your poems at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/
11/17/06
I loved this poem! The repetitive pattern is just right in conveying the intensity of the message, which is powerful. Great job!
11/19/06
You have captured today's world and painted a vivid picture of high school and the stress on today's kids.
I loved your poem, the way you set it up, and the insights it gives the reader.

With mixed emotions I say Bravo! and Lord help today's children.
11/20/06
Wow--this is very, very good. I think you've really found your voice in poetry. Very touching.
This is very well well written. I like that you chose poetry to address some of our society's problems. Great job!
11/21/06
You've covered so much in your poem. It's written objectively but with concern for the youth in society. It would be good to have it published in a school or youth magazine.
11/21/06
I love the repeating stanza. It really makes an impact when it's repeated like that. Great job.
11/21/06
Very, VERY powerful and wonderfully structured. No wonder mom made you move up ;) Great job!