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11/03/06
I really enjoyed this story! I could relate to it as there were also five generations of women in my family. My great-grandma lived to be 104 and to hold her 2-year-old great-great granddaughter (my daughter) on her lap!

I enjoyed the descriptions of the family--especially the great-grandma's "faded blue denim" eyes. Vivid, original imagery!
11/04/06
sounds like my grandmother. She's 98 this Feb. I became a grandmother this past Aug. We've got 5 generations now! A real blessing.
Amazing!