The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful comparison. Very realistic. Everyone can realte to this. Keep up the great work.
Very apt object lesson, and a pleasant, casual voice. A good read!
Great read - I loved how you took a real situation (that you described in wonderful, very interesting detail) and developed a valid lesson for us without sounding preachy. Nice job!
Very good lesson and well illustrated with a touching story. Good work!
This is well written, I could see this being read by a police chaplain - if you know an officer, ask them to point you to the station chaplain, my bet is that they would love to use it.
Cute title! Loved the story-good job! :)
One of your best. I really liked this story! :)
Good job!