The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
Your last sentence really clinched it for me.
A wonderful portrayal of someone coming to Christ. I will show it to my granddaughter!
10/21/06
Good article. There are so many things we have to learn and unlearn, but with God all things are possible.
I really enjoyed this writing!
Your perspective and POV,the idea of the voices in Marie's head being the R&R police... very creative.
I loved your line "One stronger than the R&R voice".
Having walked through healing in this regard I love that, if I let Him, my Father's voice will be louder.
Thanks for this and keep on keeping on with the writing.
A little tip that was given to me early in my writing experience was to avoid starting sentences with the word "there". So I am passing that advice on. Your first sentence could easily be re-worded. That being said, I enjoyed your story tremendously, and was so glad that I read it to its conclusion. Great job!