The Official Writing Challenge
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Aww. How sweet. I must admit, I had no clue where this was going (But I've been known to be dense), so great job. Spacing between the paragraphs would make it easier to read, though.
A really neat story but ruined for readers who have trouble with the bunches of words clogged together with no separation of paragraphs.

Almost gave up myself due to being reader unfriendly...but glad I didn't, as it was a delightful story with a great moral and a wonderful ending. Just space it out with double spacing next time...loved the story and nicely written. Thanks.
Hi Debbie. Sorry to use your feedback to contact you, but needed to get to you urgently about your entry in the Missionary Challenge.

Your entry cut off mid-word after only a few paragraphs. I've deleted it, so could you re-enter it please? Thanks for that. Not sure what happened.

Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)

Been cruising the old challenges and happened on this one. This is very good. And so much truth here.