The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/06
This is written from a unique POV, and is a good approach to the topic. I'm not sure about the device of leaving the protagonist and Jesus unnamed--it confused me for a bit, and I had to keep going back to make sure I had the characters straight.

I'd like to see more along this line, thought, perhaps written in first person. Good job.