The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/06
I love this sweet, little take on life. You summed things up nicely, neatly, and to the point.

Great job.
I love this poem and the thought behind it. I tripped on a few lines because of rhythm, but none-the-less I really like it. Blessings.
09/18/06
Lovely word picture - and I especially like the fourth stanza. Lovely!
09/18/06
Very well-crafted. I think Mid's right about adding "the". I always give people who write their entries in poetry, extra points. Although, I'm not a judge, so it really doesn't matter, really. ;)