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09/10/06
Very thought-provoking. Great analogy. Thanks for sharing. I'll be pondering this all day. I love the line about it not being your job to save them, you just point to the Living Water. Keep up the good work.
09/11/06
This kept me riveted from beginning to end. The flow was wonderful. I really enjoyed this.
Many good lessons here. How true that the things that lure us could be innocent or deadly. A good warning to keep focused on the living water. Nice job.
09/13/06
This was captivating, and well written. I loved the way you found the spiritual truth in it. Thanks for sharing this!