The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved the contrasting analogies. Very well done.
I never thought of Life like that. Thanks for making me think. Wonderful anology. Good job.
I wondered where the two paths were leadidng. Your last paragraph summed it up beautifully. Great message.
I really like how you handled this. Only a couple of things were a bit bothersome: one, the word "faithfully" with which you ended your article. It needs to be closer to the word it modifies. And the bigger issue to making sure that the reader doesn't get the impression that all adopted kids turn out to be a "rough ride" and all others turn out to be a "smooth ride" — I know you didn't mean to convey that, but it struck me that way. But other than those minor things, I think you did an admirable job.
Claudia! It's you! I just stumbled across your name. Welcome to FaithWriters! We have a Minnesota Nice section on the message board. You are more than welcome to join. I loved your entry. I'm off to read the rest. :-)