The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/06
Great final paragraph! You make some wonderful points here. I enjoyed reading this, and it made me think! Thanks for writing!
08/23/06
I liked the contrasting images, and the idea that the whole earth is God's valley. I think you could expand this a bit too, and perhaps include some other possible views of the valley of earth.