The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the conversational tone at the beginning of this! This is very well written over all, and a wonderful message for those of us stuck in a valley of any kind. Thanks!!
The title drew me in. I loved the contrast between the two reactions to Carey. They both had the same sentiments, but the delivery was entirely different. A nice reminder on how to approach people like Carey.
Once again, your writing takes this reader captive. You sure know how to put us into another world, eager to get acquainted with your characters and understand the conflict. Thank you for an interesting side road off my path, today!