The Official Writing Challenge
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God has certainly given you a rich vision!

We'd like to read more--perhaps several paragraphs, one on each way that you plan to reach people for God?
Did another paragraph get lost in the copy-paste? As I began to read, I got the impression you were building up to a divine appointment, where the narrator would stop short as he meets the Master and suddenly hears the words of John the Baptist, "He (Jesus) must increase, I must decrease."

I have to admit I was dismayed that you left your narrator wrapped up in his vision. We all have grand ideas about what WE're planning to do for Jesus. Instead, it's really about all JESUS has done for us.
In the words of one of our missionary friends: "I'm just a beggar telling other beggars where to find the Bread."