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By Andre Kingston
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Gladly, if you will let it go. He says.
Wrestling, fighting, waffling.
Fighting to keep it.
Fighting to give it up.
To rely on someone else is un-American.
Do it yourself is the motto today.
This culture surrounds me.
This is not my home. I say.
Then leave it. He says.
Spirit is willing, body is trained.
Fighting to rely on God.
Trained to do it myself, without thinking.
The golden rule.
Do unto others as you want done to you.
Look out for number one.
I trust you implicitly. I say.
Show me by letting me lead. He says.
Success, job, relationships, life
The only way to succeed is to put yourself forward.
Success is defined wrong.
We are told to choose our direction from our passion.
God gives direction for those who know how to look.
I am blind.
Here, God, is my soul; take care of it. I say.
Will you really let me? He asks.
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I am blind.
A perfect description of our helplessness, followed by a good conclusion.
These are really good points your made in your prose.
Enjoyed reading, there is some depth here. God bless ya, littlelight
Also think about each word, and how you can color it better for the reader.
Like this:
Think
about each word
How
can I color each word
better
for my readers?
Keep writing!