The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job! This short story captured the essence of hospitality. I loved the title as well as the characters and plot. One suggestion, please add a few line spaces throughout your text so it makes it easier on the eyes. Please be sure to add this piece to your writing portfolio. I can see it being published somewhere in the near future! Again, great job!
02/14/05
Very nicely written. Good job.
As my mom ages I am much more conscious of how our seniors need our help. I could just see this little senior worrying about how to get things done and yet, determined to do it.
I'm not that senior, but your story really spoke to me as I have had major surgery on my left knee. You touched the right spot for me.
02/20/05
Sarah was so Christ-like. She went all out to help Elsa. I like how you demonstrated her patience and generosity in this story.