The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/17
Great job with the introduction. The words really drew me in.

There were some some spacing problems (ahard instead of a hard, and no space after some of the periods) but otherwise it was a good, empowering read.
10/29/17
I really enjoyed reading this. The second to last paragraph was very powerful. Well done.
When we say "if" to God, he will do the "if". Our "if" makes us available to God for his use.

When we write one piece, we have given ourselves to God so the next written piece will come to mind.

Keep writing.
10/31/17
Your devotional contained some very good points; however, it would have been even more powerful if you had shown more and told less. Before you submit your story, you can preview it and make changes.

Some suggestions:

Prown should be spelled prone.

Midianite should be capitalized.

He felt [like] a nobody.

God will separate us to[o], for his glory.