The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very well written essay in poetic style. The length of lines and rhymes made it easy to read.

Your thoughts were easily detected as well as respected.

We each have to choose to "work out our own salvation with fear and trembling".

Good writing of your thoughts on this topic.
11/21/16
Thanks for sharing your timely poem. Regarding the line "That’s not speaking to someone when you’re not using your lips" - do you think it would be better said, "That's speaking to someone when you're not using your lips"? Just a suggestion.