The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/16
Great story and serious reminder to all who delay seeking the Lord while He may be found! You may want to read over it carefully and check for a few spots that could use a comma, etc.
The sentence that ended with "the Christian kids were weird" need some punctuation mark to aid smooth reading. It also may have had an extra unnecessary word.

Many Christians aren't the examples God intends them to be to prevent such things happening. We have to examine our lives so we aren't one of them without knowing it.

Keep writing and warning.