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“You cannot help me now. It’s too late,” she says, “Why didn’t you help me when I still had a chance?”
“All I see is death. I have no hope or escape. Not even the pleasure of a dream can give me relief. Why didn’t you tell me about Him? I lived everyday thinking that I was in the right. The life I lived was selfish and unworthy of Him. I didn’t know that this awaited me. The guilt and pain I feel is indescribable. If you loved me, you would have fought harder to spare me this anguish.”
“Where are they? Where are the ones that I love? I hear no souls with me. I am alone. I once had so many friends. People wanted to be with me, but now, my misery pushes them away. How I want to be in His presence, but whenever I come close, I burn in agony. I am unclean. Why didn’t you tell me that my actions were wrong? Why didn’t you take my hand and pull me away? If you loved me, you would have used all your strength to pull me out of the fire.”
“Do you smell that? It is death. Death is not what it seems to be. It is something much worse than you can ever imagine. I thought that death was a joke. I felt invincible, but I was foolish. We all die at some point, even you. But, why didn’t you tell me that He can save us from death? Why didn’t you tell me that with Him we would live forever? If you loved me, you would have told me the truth.”
“I quench my thirst with tears – bitter, salty tears. Drink I tell myself because I know that I deserve this. We all deserve this, even you. But unlike me, you still have a chance.”
“And He said to them, ‘Go into all the world and preach the gospel to every creature.'”
Mark 16:15
“And this gospel of the kingdom will be preached in all the world as a witness to all the nations, and then the end will come.”
Matthew 24:14
“Declare His glory among the nations, His wonders among all peoples.”
Psalms 96:3
“Go therefore and make disciples of all the nations, baptizing them in the name of the Father and of the Son and of the Holy Spirit, teaching them to observe all things that I have commanded you; and lo, I am with you always, even to the end of the age.”
Matthew 28:19-20
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Is there a way to continue with one person still talking but in a new paragraph so your story is broken up so it is easier to read. An expert will have to comment on this as I am not sure what would be best.
Description of Hell can raise the imaginations because there is not a complete description but suggestions of how horrible it will be.
Imagination rules in writings like these.
Good writing. Thanks.