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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Trees (12/05/05)
The trees
calm my disease
The sinewy branches reaching
To hug me

A creation of God
That dances across the sky
To reach high

And reminds us
That’s where God is

Please
Don’t breach
Just reach
Through the trees
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karen McLamb
12/12/05
Wow! this is nice short and sweet. What a very nice poem.
keep writing!
Jan Ackerson
12/13/05
This leaves me wanting more; how do trees calm your disease?

You've used lovely poetic language here; in a longer poem, I think your readers would understand you more fully.