The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/15
A good message, as indeed our Churches and our Christian beliefs are under attack. A Call to Arms is really what's needed to counter the erosion of our Biblical teachings and what Christ expects of us. The weapon of sustained Prayer must be one of our goals.
This is a great story. You definitely nailed the topic. I liked that you had several different messages in this piece. Depending on who is reading it, God will guide the words to what their hearts new the most. In one piece of dialog, you don't use a taglines (like he said or she asked). It's a complete sentence, so it should look like this: we’ll proceed.” With a smile, Reverend Peterson nodded to Brother Ed before sitting down.
That's a little thing though and doesn't impact the oomph in your message. You did a fine job of establishing a conflict right away and your ending brought the story full circle.
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