The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/15
Beautiful inspirational story. WEll done.

God bless~
This is a great story in so many ways. Not only does it deal with overcoming hardships, Jesus' loves for us, but it shows the devotion of a mother too. Be careful about repeating phrases or words in such a short piece. You did a nice job of writing on topic while delivering a great message.
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