The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/14
Multi layed messages in this well delivered entry. Will give many pause to reflect and ponder their circuitious route in life.

Well done!

God bless~
04/25/14
You're absolutely right...it is about God and others. Thanks for sharing. You've given me some things to think about in your story.
04/26/14
There is a lot of truth here, but my critique would be that there were almost so many things going on that I lost the focus. Good descriptions, but try to keep the piece focused on one thing and your writing will really tighten up.

Thanks so much for sharing these insights!
Just as Jesus used some interesting picture stories, you also did with the fish.

Each Christian community has different needs therefore the Holy Spirit gives/blesses different people with different gifts. In this respect we may still be equal just different.

God gives each one opportunities to be of service to others. We want to be watchful so we do not loose out on these opportunities.