The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/05
All of your points are true, but nothing beckoned me to join in. It was like listening to a teacher giving a monologue. To be inspired I need to be drawn in and feel with you, laugh with you, feel like we have something in common.
Good thoughts. Paragraphs would make it easier to read. God bless,