The Official Writing Challenge
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02/12/11
This is just beautiful.
02/13/11
What an amazing tribute to your grandparents. I liked how you kept repeating the line, "We're a family"
This is a beautiful tribute to the heads of your family. I have a poem about my son that I add to every couple of years. I could see you adding even more to this as each generation gives birth to the next. What a lovely family heirloom.
I liked this very much. Halfway through I thought, this sounds like a song. Maybe it still will be.

I enjoy the theme and tribute, not just to your grandparents, but to everyone who works hard and struggles for their family.

Well written - thanks for sharing.