The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/07
Very creative. You have a good way of describing a scene.
11/16/07
wonderful scene, keep building your skills and let your writing flow!
very good! I wanted to know more. keep it coming
11/21/07
Wow ! What an interesting setting! The only thing that bothered me was that the word "Bible" wasn't capitalized. Good story...full of hope.