The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/07
I had a bit of trouble following your poem, but I appreciate you sharing it!
07/14/07
It was okay. I noticed the title was Hungry but I did not see that in your article. There was one grammer problem.
07/14/07
Sorry I did not get to finish what I would to say. I noticed at the end where you wrote the word tonight, and then you put the letter i. It need to be captialize. Other than that it was okay.

Interesting to say the least. I like how few words you used to get your point across.