The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this. Good poetry.
04/13/07
Oh, I liked this poem a lot! :) You did a good job with the structure and mechanics of the piece, and the story it told was so true to life! Well-done!
04/13/07
Loved this poem! And right on for the mystery genre. Exceptionally well done.
04/18/07
This is just delightful. My favorite stanza:
"So how it will end, I’ve got to discover,
I’ll turn up the lamp and pull up the cover.
I’ve got to keep reading, ’though it’s half-past-three,
I can’t close the book---the suspense is killing me!"

It's a creative take on the mystery topic as well.