The Official Writing Challenge
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Very cute way to give the salvation messgae! Well written. I liked the last lines!
11/11/06
Definitely a cute approach. A few bits seemed superfluous, but I enjoyed this unique perspective! Keep writing!
11/12/06
Very interesting and enjoyable. A clever piece and I enjoyed reading it. Good work!
What a creative take! This was wonderful to read! I really enjoyed it. Great job! The ending was the best when everything just 'came' together. :)