The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. This was pretty deep, but the message still came across. Keep it up!
10/13/06
A really good title here, and lots of great spiritual material. It could benefit a bit from some tightening up, though. For example, in the 4th paragraph, you seem to arm your fire fighters with swords, and then you give light to people in flames. We know what you're going for, but keeping your metaphors and analogies tighter will make for an easier read. There's a lot here that really preaches--good job.
10/13/06
AMEN!
10/14/06
A good message and you supported it with very good thoughts and Biblical principles. Nicely done.
This was a great description of pastors of firefighters. Thanks for the reminder to pray for mine (again)! In the 4th paragraph,I think you could have left out "or instrument" and just let the Bible be a Sword. I liked it when you said that they "get burnt out themselves" (fire - burnt out - get it? of course you do - you wrote it. :) Really powerful message.
Edit to my comment - I meant "pastors AS firefighters".