The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/06
It's easy to get lost in the day to day routines of life. Thanks for reminding us that we need to be His everyday.
08/07/06
Very well done. Good applications and kept my interest throughout. Nice devotion.
08/08/06
LOVE your first paragraph - and the total contrast between it and the second. Very effective! Such a good lesson,and very well-written!!
08/08/06
Good story. I liked the first paragraph too. There was part of me that would like to have seen it repeated at the end. Your resolution was not the change in your character only the prayer that one day God might change. It might have been nice to see how in God's will real life can be more pleasant than dreams. But it was very good in demonstraiting the monotony of the work day, week, month, year, decade...
08/08/06
Thanks for this reminder that a thankful attitude makes the difference!!
Awesome job! Packed a great message. Your opening paragraph was top notch and so was your title.

May the Lord continue to guide your quill as you write for the glory of HIM!
08/15/06
I like the line about getting to work without being killed. It made me want to read the entire article.