The Official Writing Challenge
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Hello! I like the story or was this a skit? I was a little confused on the names of the characters and some punctuations. Keep writing, God bless your endeavors.
08/04/06
A little punctuation and the confusion would be resolved. But this is really a very neat piece of writing from a fascinating perspective. Good job.
08/09/06
Lovely, creative article with a very good ending. PM me if you want some help thinking about the punctuation. Otherwise, fab.