The Official Writing Challenge
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Great take on the theme and an immediate interest-grabber, especially for women - few of us can resist shoes! The application was nicely done. Good job.
Very clever take on the theme! This definitely held my interest. Super work!
This was great, very well written. Great take on the topic, and great execution.

I could see this in a devotional book, and I thought your writing even had a bit of the "chicklit" feel to it, if that is something you are interested in. Great voice.
Not only was this piece enlightening, but also entertaining. One small suggestion, try not to have that many "I's" begin your paragraphs. It's a difficult task in a first person story NOT to have an "I"...but there are ways to get around it. I loved this story! Thanks for sharing.