The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/06
Wow, this is amazing! I'll be waiting for the sequel - we need to know what happened when she got to Ms Susie's store and made the call. Great stuff!
08/03/06
Heartfelt story, you packed so many different facets of this story into 750 words, great writing!
08/03/06
Very compelling - I really enjoyed this!!
Beautiful!
08/24/06
My goodness, such a gift for weaving a tale you have! This is certainly designed to make us want more--much more. Your characters are like family I don't want to leave. And, your writing has a unique style beyond the usual. I am impressed!