The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful. I can see and hear as you speak with our Savior. I find no fault with any part of this. To me it is flawless. A masterful work of art. But you were giving highest praise to our Savior, and in that you can never go wrong. Keep writing.
07/28/06
Just beautiful - this feels so real! Wow.
Lovely! Your writing such a beautiful 'love-poem' to our Lord.
07/30/06
Wow! I was waiting for God to take her up to walk with him, like Elijah, her walk was so close! That's what we all long for, isn't it? Thanks for the picture!