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Great job sharing the emotions of the rookie. I loved your ending! Excellent!
Well done I'd say. I share your belief. I've seen the difference myself as in the way I mourn passed loved ones. ie: my mother was a believer and though the thought of not spending time with her 'for awhile' pulled at my heart I knew when I was called home, she'd be there waiting for me. On the other hand when I've lost non-believers I seem to mourn more maybe in light of the fact I believe I'll never see them again.

I sure hope this places, it's one of my favorites this week.