The Official Writing Challenge
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07/24/06
I can feel the desperation of your soul! The piece is a bit fragmented, though - in my opinion. Maybe expand a bit on some of the points to make it flow better for the reader. Thanks for writing!
07/24/06
This piece brought up a lot of different insights for me. I enjoy things that make me review my life, thank you.