The Official Writing Challenge
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Ah, yes, the challenge of drive-thru intercoms and learing to control our tempers. Watch use of words (quiet and quite).
I think we can all relate to this story. Try showing your characters feelings through action rather than telling us what she's feeling. Good job.
Your unusual title made me wonder what I would find, here. But, your story is a delightful slice of everyday life with all its woes and surprises. You are on your way to higher levels, I'm sure :)
What a delight to read. I agree with Sharon...if you need help in this area there is a wonderful bk out there, "Words You Thought You Knew..." by Jeanna Glatzer. What a life saver it has been for me. A wonderful resource. Also, watch your spacing in your title. Every little thing counts. Keep writing!