The Official Writing Challenge
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Good writing! And good, solid preaching, too. Very powerful exposition on existence as God defines it. I can feel and share your excitement!

At the end, I would suggest putting, "I hear God say," rather than "GOD:" Although you're impassioned about your subject, it's good to do the reader the courtesy of allowing them to conclude for themselves whether God has or has not inspired your message. Then, at the finale, I feel it would be good for you yourself to make the invitation, in your own voice, so the POV (point of view) remains consistent with the beginning of the article.

Good, moving entry! Keep writing!