The Official Writing Challenge
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06/22/06
Good take! Very creative:) I could feel the pushing and the journey with her!!
Wow! Absolutely captivating! I had to go back and read it again, with the marvelous ending in mind. You won't be in Level 1 for long!
Wow! This is a great piece. You kept me in suspense to the very end, wondering what exactly was going on. And then in the last paragraph you caught me totally off guard with the reality. Excellent job!
06/26/06
This is great! I like the descriptions and the surprise ending of who is telling the story. :)
06/27/06
What a very clever perspective to write from. I didn't even suspect where you were going until the very end. Great job.
06/27/06
What a very clever perspective to write from. I didn't even suspect where you were going until the very end. Great job.
06/27/06
What a very clever perspective to write from. I didn't even suspect where you were going until the very end. Great job.
06/27/06
What a very clever perspective to write from. I didn't even suspect where you were going until the very end. Great job.
08/24/06
OH,My! This is unbelievably good writing. I love your surprise ending. Who would have thought up such a story. "Unique" is hardly a big enough word to describe this. I am entirely dumbfounded. And, this is your FIRST writing challenge entry?