The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute message using a warehouse of abundance. Nicely done.
Nice story...And there it is abundance, free for the asking!
Yes, very good. I liked the way you tie the blessings of God to a warehouse, and the boss to God. He did pay the price. There is nothing we can do to pay for it. Very good. Keep writing.
This was awesome, so glad you won!

Congratulations, Rachel! You did a superb job building the suspense and delightfully wrapping it up. Looking forward to more from you!